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Coal

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Literature Text

Glittering, glamorous, golden giftwrap!
Such a prize must be inside!
Tear tenderly the tissued tarp
Concealing the wondrous thing.
Unwrap
     Unwrap
        Unwrap...
What's this?

Coal.
I, of course, have life and thoughts which inspired this, but one of my favorite things about symbolic poetry is the often very different things that readers pull out of it.

Go to it! :)
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Ihha
A very creative peom, nice!